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 In writing, we are asking the students to "bump up" their work. In other words, make it better. For example, try to take a level 2 piece of work and make it a level 3! Here are the suggestions on how to bump up your work in the 6 areas of writing that we study:

IDEAS:   
make an interesting topic sentence
  • add detail sentence(s)
  • make sure the details are on topic   
  • ORGANIZATION:
  • have a beginning, middle and end
  • be sure the order makes sense   
  • VOICE:      
  • choose words that create a particular tone
  • show strong emotion      
  • WORD CHOICE:    
  • use lots of describing words
  • use strong action words
  • SENTENCE FLUENCY:
  • write complete sentences  
vary and expand sentences
  • write a good concluding sentence for each paragraph   
  • CONVENTIONS:   
  • begin each sentence with a capital letter
  • end each sentence with the correct punctuation
  • use commas correctly
  • use correct grammar
  • indent paragraphs           
 
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